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Why Monash?


Today, our teacher asked us to write a short essay about what has brought our decision to come to study at Monash University. This essay is the first one in this course and it's just for the teacher to evaluate our writing skills.



There are many factors that make it easier to get a great job and one of them is the university degree. Therefore, I have decided to study at Monash University in Australia because it has a high rank, many facilities and offers the specialization that I would have a degree in.

Monash is one of the well-known universities around the world that can be a good influence for big companies to accept employees who have studied in it. Being one of the top fifty universities in the world would be the passport for a good career.

An important thing in order to be creative at the university is its facilities. Especially, those which help the students make researches and apply what they have studied. For instance, the library and the computers labs.

Monash university has the specialization that I can be creative at because I find myself in it but other universities do not offer.

All in all, being Monash a top rated university, having good facilities and offering the specialization that I like, brought my decision to come to study at such great university.


By: Nabeel Posted on: 2008-10-14 09:41:21 Viewed: 751
Category: English 2 comment(s)


Murtadha Wrote:
I didn't like this part:
"Monash university has the specialization that I can be creative at because I find myself in it but other universities do not offer."
I don't know why, but I think it's because of the punctuation marks; you need to put some to organize it :)
Mmmmmm...... your essay is good, but I think you need to put more statistics and specific facts more than the rank.

Have fun :P
Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2008 Time: 12:39:40 PM

Nabeel (Admin) Wrote:
Hi Murtadha!
I think there's no need for the punctuations because I used the words "because" and "but".

Anyway, it's just a short normal essay as I mentioned before, not an academic one to include statistics :)

Thanx for your comment
Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2008 Time: 01:58:10 PM


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